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you can make it a little less brighter and a little more detailed pictures
a few of the paragraphs were only one paragraph and the text is alittle small but on the other hand it was great!
You could have put a little more research into it but other than that great job!
I think your typing is kind of harder to read and you could have put more details with some of your topics, other than that is was great!
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ReplyDeletea few of the paragraphs were only one paragraph and the text is alittle small but on the other hand it was great!
ReplyDeleteYou could have put a little more research into it but other than that great job!
ReplyDeleteI think your typing is kind of harder to read and you could have put more details with some of your topics, other than that is was great!
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